Just a little tip

Through my own experiences, I have found it hard to get emotion through my novels, it takes me a while to get what I like to think is a great sense of emotion. There are moments in my books were characters are going through Hell, because writers always love a bit of drama, but in all honesty, I never really understood how to make my words more heart felt.

But then it came to me! Yes, it isn't about the dialog, its about the other things going on around the characters. You have to make what they are doing much more prominent. Put in what they are doing, facial expressions. People use characters eyes to get across how they are feeling. This is because people say that eyes are the looking glass into the soul, use it to get across how your characters are feeling.

It's a hard thing to do and it comes with practice, the more you write the easier things will get. 

J.A.M